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Kahu #2 di lobonz commento di gianni |
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Pfff, sorry lobo but before to write the last message i didnt see that we are in the "artwork" section.
Anyway, i still think that with a different postwork this experiment can turn into a masterpiece.
bye. |
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Kahu #2 di lobonz commento di gianni |
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Hi lobo, and wellcome here.
Sorry, but i guess that this good portrait ld be much more better without the coarse effect that u gave to the picture.
I like the frame; in the moment u took it, the character had deep, communicative eyes...and all his face helped his eyes to be able to talk with us now.
A powerful image, that, as i told u, i think u can impove with a more "photographic" use of the postwork.
Anyway, congratulations. |
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they... di lobonz commento di cricro76 |
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cricro76 ha scritto: | Hi Lobonz!
It's great to see that Photo4U is becoming an international place to discuss about our passion!
Your shot is very nice for what it regards the two children and their look "to infinity and beyond" .... Actually the Flood filter applied in Photoshop IMHO gives to this beautiful picture a sort of "cheap" effect, that definitely I think was not needed. Anyway, all in all a good idea for the frame melting into water.
Welcome between us!
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they... di lobonz commento di lobonz |
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cricro76 ha scritto: | Hi Lobonz!
It's great to see that Photo4U is becoming an international place to discuss about our passion!
Welcome between us!
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hi mate,
thx 4 warm welcome
i came here to share, learn (photography) from you guys
cheers
lobo |
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they... di lobonz commento di cricro76 |
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Hi Lobonz!
It's great to see that Photo4U is becoming an international place to discuss about our passion!
Welcome between us!
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they... di lobonz commento di lobonz |
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melarossa ha scritto: | hi lobonz welcome to p4u
hope you'll enjoy to stay with us
very good shot
surely it can be viewed better in an other section ... I move it in the right place... ritratti (portraits) as FotoFaz says
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hi,
great...thx
cheers
lobo |
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Kahu di lobonz commento di lobonz |
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mike1964 ha scritto: | I speak very bad englis.
Your picture is good, but there is too sharp.
Welcome between us.
What is your camera?
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hi,
thx 4 comment...at the moment i got 2 cams: eos 350d and nikond70s...mostly i shooted pix by nikon...  |
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they... di lobonz commento di melarossa |
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hi lobonz welcome to p4u
hope you'll enjoy to stay with us
very good shot
surely it can be viewed better in an other section ... I move it in the right place... ritratti (portraits) as FotoFaz says
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Kahu di lobonz commento di mike1964 |
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I speak very bad englis.
Your picture is good, but there is too sharp.
Welcome between us.
What is your camera?
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Kahu di lobonz commento di lobonz |
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Citazione: |
Ok...I'll try again
First of all Welcome!
Basicly I like a lot this pic for the close cut and for the expression of your friend, but on the other side I agree with Ocio for prefering a 2:3 vertical format and also i see too much usm and I don't like very much the desaturation you gave it, naturally that's just a personal opinion.
And to end in my p.s. i was wondering if you understand italian or not, well you answered!
I hope my english has been good enough
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thx 4 the translation...you done very well...
cheers
lobo |
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Kahu di lobonz commento di Diego |
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lobonz ha scritto: | Diego ha scritto: | Prima di tutto benvenuto!
Fondamentalmente la foto mi piace per il taglio stretto e la sua espressione, mentre concordo con ocio per il taglio 3:4 verticale. Inoltre trovo troppa maschera di contrasto e non mi piace la desaturazione
naturally imho
P.S.
..ma sei straniero? Capisci i commenti scritti in italiano?
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hi,
i don't have a glue what you talkin about...
to be more specific i don't speak italian so i you can write posts in english i'll be greatfull
ps. thx 4 the comment |
Ok...I'll try again
First of all Welcome!
Basicly I like a lot this pic for the close cut and for the expression of your friend, but on the other side I agree with Ocio for prefering a 2:3 vertical format and also i see too much usm and I don't like very much the desaturation you gave it, naturally that's just a personal opinion.
And to end in my p.s. i was wondering if you understand italian or not, well you answered!
I hope my english has been good enough
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they... di lobonz commento di lobonz |
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FotoFaz ha scritto: | Hello lobo! and welcome in our out-of-brain comunity!
I like your pic very much. It gives a very important message, and it does in a simple way (the best way to be immediately understood).
I think however, that it is not in correct section of the forum.
This beautifull portrait would be more appreciated in the section "Ritratto" (that means portrait), or also in the "Artwork" section in which we usually put the photos that has had some post-porduction (except from standard fine tuning such as contrast, brightness, white balance, and something like that).
I'd suggetst you also to present yourself in our "new entry" section (in italian is "Per i nuovi utenti" and you can find it following this link http://www.photo4u.it/viewforum.php?f=71 ).
You will find lots of people that will welcome you!
Be ready for the lots of questions that our users will ask you!
Bye! |
hi mate,
thx 4 the invitation (forum)...i'd like 2 more participate here ... but luck of time at the moment...  |
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they... di lobonz commento di FotoFaz |
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Hello lobo! and welcome in our out-of-brain comunity!
I like your pic very much. It gives a very important message, and it does in a simple way (the best way to be immediately understood).
I think however, that it is not in correct section of the forum.
This beautifull portrait would be more appreciated in the section "Ritratto" (that means portrait), or also in the "Artwork" section in which we usually put the photos that has had some post-porduction (except from standard fine tuning such as contrast, brightness, white balance, and something like that).
I'd suggetst you also to present yourself in our "new entry" section (in italian is "Per i nuovi utenti" and you can find it following this link http://www.photo4u.it/viewforum.php?f=71 ).
You will find lots of people that will welcome you!
Be ready for the lots of questions that our users will ask you!
Bye! |
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they... di lobonz commento di lobonz |
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Derby ha scritto: | Welcome lobonz
Really nice shoot, it seems to talk about the long way to do, the future life of these children.
The black border is a strange frame, as the border stops in the water... I cannot understand if it's real or not
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hi,
yes you're absolute right : they have loooonnnnng way to do…
the frame effect - plug-in – FLOOD…
cheers |
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they... di lobonz commento di lobonz |
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cosimo cortese ha scritto: | what a beautifull picture lobonz, my compliments!
Just a pair of personal notes (just my pov), hope you like them..
maybe more upper space (more sky) and less lower (less sea) could give the photo a sensation of wider horizon.. how can I say.. more space to the future?
You show us also an interesting postwork job.. first time I see this kind of frame, really original, but I think you can improve it.
After the first look you can see a little perspective incongruence, just where water touch legs. Seems like two different inclination planes: water before boys and water further boys.
Trying to say in a different way: the picture was shooted with a tele, but the first plane looks like a wide lens shooting attachment.
Try to progressively out of focus this area, simulating the same tele dept of field.
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hi,
regarding the frame...this is plug-in (4 PS &PsP) - "Flood"
also thx 4 your thoughts about my pic...show me different perspective for the same pic...
cheers
lobo |
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Kahu di lobonz commento di giuliano |
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welcome!!
viso molto interessante ed ottima espressione; bella la composizionee moltro buona la leggibilità. A mio parere troppo accentuata la maschera di contrasto.
Ciao. giuliano |
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laura...#2 di lobonz commento di lobonz |
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Corto ha scritto: | A very dreaming image, nice b/w, the flou effect is very appropriate in this case.
One small thing: i would have cut the top as far as the head of your child |
hi,
thx 4 comment...next time i'll consider your idea about cutting  |
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Kahu di lobonz commento di lobonz |
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Diego ha scritto: | Prima di tutto benvenuto!
Fondamentalmente la foto mi piace per il taglio stretto e la sua espressione, mentre concordo con ocio per il taglio 3:4 verticale. Inoltre trovo troppa maschera di contrasto e non mi piace la desaturazione
naturally imho
P.S.
..ma sei straniero? Capisci i commenti scritti in italiano?
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hi,
i don't have a glue what you talkin about...
to be more specific i don't speak italian so i you can write posts in english i'll be greatfull
ps. thx 4 the comment |
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